Dude this really sucks....
Haha naww I'm just kiddin with ya man, But this is defently more clearer and more easy listening than the original, cool how you added Fruity Loops and guitar together. But I think you probly coulda added some slick solo in the middle of the song somwhere. Thad be beast, but all in one pretty damn awesome dude, starting to get that more pro sound to ya! Keep it up maybe you'll be famous one day :P